by Julie's channel
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Tags: modern language association, roller coaster, six flags
Hi Cornelius, I wanted to compliment you, thing the correct heading for your paragraph. The only thing is the comma actually goes after the number twenty instead of between the month and the date also modern language association who makes our guidelines sticky(?) they don't want any extra spaces between the heading and the paragraph. Ok regarding the paragraph I certainly see why you chose to write about six flags(?) especially since one of the model paragraph was about writing a roller coaster. I recommend that you go back and re read that sample paragraph because it wasn't simply about you know hey this is the roller you know this is a roller coaster and this is main feature here's another roller coaster and it's main feature. It was more about one moment on writing the roller coaster in that that moment just be the or there's few moments.
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Tags: doubts, influence, decisions
Hello Katie! I'm doing this iPadio because I want to explain you about the person who has influenced me in a good way in my life. I decided to talk about Raquel who is a friend I met in the university and the truth is she has helped me a lot in important moments when I had to take big decisions. For example when Hernan asked me to go to leave with him I was afraid and I had many doubts because it was very big for me but she said: "just do it, if it doesn't work..."
Hello Katie, I am Estel(?) and I am doing this iPadio(?) to explain you about the person who has influenced me in my in my life. I decided to talk about my friend Raquel and honest honestly I think she has has had a good influence on me through the years we've known each other. And especially in important moments where was necessary to take big decisions. For example when I broke down with Arnan(?) I am needed to find a new flat and I was very upset because I
I know I know ___ some places that you know don't have reception were you in Burgada(?) yeah you were there since the morning or you're there all weekend I've been here for the past like 4 days ___ it's crazy there now right cos of the long weekend ___ it's hot hot so tell me who's trying to get you not to testify who's trying to get not to testify my mom ___ my mom said that you said that someone I didn't understand who it was you know brother or your mom or I don't ___ everybody not only my mom
Thank you for calling the catalog. This is Nicole how can I help you? Hi can I speak to Ed Chan extension one sixty. Ok may I ask who's calling please. Marceo(?). Ok give me a moment. Alright. Thank you.
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Tags: iphone, sunset, peace
Hey whoever is listening. This is coming from Tracy. This would be a good idea to do it everyday iPhone cast on my way home cos I usually don't like to listen to anything at this moment and I feel like sunset peace that is if that wasn't ___ that word as much as today didn't meet my idealistic expectations I feel good about it somehow. I managed to do almost all of the things that I we wanted to do is just that I didn't wake up early and that is is because didn't fall asleep that quick or I have no idea I just it is really hard for me to get out of bed. I know have this.
Ok wait I need to if I didn't do the right way and I also need to see if I can add mom. I wanna see if I can like record an interview and like record a three way conference call but ___. With your iPhone. Yeah. So I don't have to go to work tomorrow. I don't think I can do it. Why. Because.